Fangala the Flying Feline

I think there's some confusion. Part 2 is already posted. Check out my portfolio if you want to read it.

Thanks, people! I DESPERATELY need reviews on part 2, so if you're interested...

Thanks, gadi! Yeah, the verses were supposed to be obscurely weird and poetic, but maybe they're less poetic and more obscurely weird. :D I see your point with that one ...

Um...BBB? This wasn't supposed to be funny...

Hi again, canis. I'm glad you cleared that up for me. Fixing it is really pretty simple. Instead of having the caribou have an injured leg, have it be old ...

Thanks, Seraph! You know, I really am a comedy writer at heart. It's just what I do best. I could spend my whole life writing weird random things about evil ...

Heehee! Thanks for the critiques, guys. I never realized it was rushed, but I'll take your word for it, since I know I have issues with rushing. And yeah, I ...

Do you honestly think I take this story seriously? :D It's supposed to be corny, hence the ridiculous title. Thank you for the comments, and I see your point. I ...

Woohoo! Wolves! My God, I'm such a wolf person. Have you read The Sight? That's what this reminded me of. I loved this because I have such a clear picture ...

Haha, I can totally hear this on the radio! This is great, really. If this was poetry, the cliches would drive me up the wall, but seeing as this is ...

Haha, thanks you guys. No, by all means, critisize away! I totally hear what you're saying. Even when I was posting this piece, I was like, "Minions? Griffins spitting beams ...

This is gorgeous. It seems like free verse and a defined rhyme scheme at the same time. I look forward to more of your poetry.

Stunning. I'm so glad I read this. BBB, you are a truly amazing writer, and I can't wait to read your first published novel.

Are you trying to make me cry? That last scene was amazing. Horribly sad, but amazing. Just one small suggestion: add more sensory detail to break up the dialogue. Other ...

I LOVE YOU GUYS! Why are you so darn helpful? Seraph, I'm so glad you're still reading, and your comments are more helpful and insightful then ever. And Ayra, thank ...